Hi Malak, and Retaj your blog is great because.. I really like the picture and the font of the writing . However, I think you could add some more pictures and colour to your blog. I agree because school uniform could be a little bit boring especially when you wear them every single day.
Catch you later alligator…
Hi Malak and Retaj! I really enjoyed your blog and you had really good points to support your ideas. However, why don’t you try to stick to one font and make your blog more engaging for the person who is reading it? I agree with you because it is really agitating wearing the same clothes five times in a row. That is all from me! Keep up the good work.
Hello Malak and Retaj, I like that you split your blog into different paragraphs! Also, I like how you presented the work too! However, maybe you could have stopped repeating ‘bright’ and ‘pretty’ because people might disagree. However, I do agree and like this blog, keep up the good work! From: Kasim.
Hello Malak and Retaj, I really like how you have used a picture. However, your blog isn’t colourful; I think that you should have made your title big and bold so that it could be eye-catching. I agree that school uniforms should be banned because it is irritating that I have to wear the same clothes everyday. That is all from me, goodbye, Elaf.
Hi Malak and Retaj , I like that you used a photo and standard English. Next time, you can try to add more photos. However, your blog has bold handwriting to catch the readers attention and you need more colour for your blog. It is eye catching and engaging. I don’t agree because without school uniform people wont know what school your in and you will look very smart.
Hi Malak and Retaj! I really like your blog! You have a nice picture and the title is really engaging. However, I think next time you should try make your font more exciting. I also agree that school uniforms are not the best clothes to wear. Your blog is really informative! Well done!
Hey there Malak and Retaj ,your blog has a good point: it is hard to find your uniforms in the morning and you are all drowsing round. However, you’re repeating the word pretty and some boys or girls might not agree that our own cloths are always pretty and there not always bright they can be black and grey . But overall, I liked the big, bold title: it stands out and people will straight away know what the blog is about . And it can be really hard to put on ; it is itchy and stiff .
So please enjoy my comment and have a wonderful day. Byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hi Malak and Retej I realy like the title because it stands out and I like what your blog is talking about. I think there has to be more fact and it has to be more engaging and there is a good picture. There picture good because it is talking about what is happening.
Hi Retaj and Malak. I like your title because it is big and bold. I disagree because what if you don’t have any clothes to wear to school. Also the picture doesn’t represent the blog.
HI MALAK AND RETAJ,I LIKE YOUR BLOG BECAUSE I LIKE HOW YOU PUT INFORMATION AND FACTS THAT YOU PUT. HOWEVER, I THINK YOU CAN IMPROVE BY MAKING IT MORE COLOURFUL AND MAKING IT STAND OUT MORE ENGAJING. I AGREE WITH YOUR BLOG BECAUSE IT IS TRUE AND YOU CAN WERE YOUR OWN CLOTHES BECAUSE ITS MORE EASIER.
BYE BYE! ANESA
Hi Malak and Retaj I REALLY like your blog because it has lots of facts and information however i think you can improve by making it more colourful and more engaging.i definitely agree with you because we are in our dark school uniforms for hours anyways thank you for sharing bye bye FROM ELAF A
HI MALAK AND RETARJ , I THINK YOUR BLOG IS AMAZING. I REALY LIKE HOW YOU PUT THEM INTO PAREGRAPHS .I ALLSO REALY LIKE HOW YOU DID TITLES FOR ALL OF THEM. HOWEVER , YOU COULD ADD MORE PICTURES TO YOU BLOG. BYE
Hi Malak. Hi Retaj, nice blog but I disagree with your blog I think everyone should look the same on school days because when we go on trips we could get lost because we wont look the same.
Hi Malak! Hi Retaj!
I Really Enjoyed Reading Your Blog! It had some really good features but I think you could make it a bit more aesthetically pleasing as it doesn’t have many colours or pictures. You could also make the sentences in your blog a bit more interesting sentences. Furthermore, I totally agree with your blog! see you later!
Hi Malak, and Retaj your blog is great because.. I really like the picture and the font of the writing . However, I think you could add some more pictures and colour to your blog. I agree because school uniform could be a little bit boring especially when you wear them every single day.
Catch you later alligator…
Hi Malak and Retaj! I really enjoyed your blog and you had really good points to support your ideas. However, why don’t you try to stick to one font and make your blog more engaging for the person who is reading it? I agree with you because it is really agitating wearing the same clothes five times in a row. That is all from me! Keep up the good work.
Hello Malak and Retaj, I like that you split your blog into different paragraphs! Also, I like how you presented the work too! However, maybe you could have stopped repeating ‘bright’ and ‘pretty’ because people might disagree. However, I do agree and like this blog, keep up the good work! From: Kasim.
Hello Malak and Retaj, I really like how you have used a picture. However, your blog isn’t colourful; I think that you should have made your title big and bold so that it could be eye-catching. I agree that school uniforms should be banned because it is irritating that I have to wear the same clothes everyday. That is all from me, goodbye, Elaf.
Hi Malak and Retaj , I like that you used a photo and standard English. Next time, you can try to add more photos. However, your blog has bold handwriting to catch the readers attention and you need more colour for your blog. It is eye catching and engaging. I don’t agree because without school uniform people wont know what school your in and you will look very smart.
Hi Malak and Retaj! I really like your blog! You have a nice picture and the title is really engaging. However, I think next time you should try make your font more exciting. I also agree that school uniforms are not the best clothes to wear. Your blog is really informative! Well done!
Hey there Malak and Retaj ,your blog has a good point: it is hard to find your uniforms in the morning and you are all drowsing round. However, you’re repeating the word pretty and some boys or girls might not agree that our own cloths are always pretty and there not always bright they can be black and grey . But overall, I liked the big, bold title: it stands out and people will straight away know what the blog is about . And it can be really hard to put on ; it is itchy and stiff .
So please enjoy my comment and have a wonderful day. Byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hi Malak and Retej I realy like the title because it stands out and I like what your blog is talking about. I think there has to be more fact and it has to be more engaging and there is a good picture. There picture good because it is talking about what is happening.
Hi Retaj and Malak. I like your title because it is big and bold. I disagree because what if you don’t have any clothes to wear to school. Also the picture doesn’t represent the blog.
HI MALAK AND RETAJ,I LIKE YOUR BLOG BECAUSE I LIKE HOW YOU PUT INFORMATION AND FACTS THAT YOU PUT. HOWEVER, I THINK YOU CAN IMPROVE BY MAKING IT MORE COLOURFUL AND MAKING IT STAND OUT MORE ENGAJING. I AGREE WITH YOUR BLOG BECAUSE IT IS TRUE AND YOU CAN WERE YOUR OWN CLOTHES BECAUSE ITS MORE EASIER.
BYE BYE! ANESA
Hi Malak and Retaj I REALLY like your blog because it has lots of facts and information however i think you can improve by making it more colourful and more engaging.i definitely agree with you because we are in our dark school uniforms for hours anyways thank you for sharing bye bye FROM ELAF A
HI MALAK AND RETARJ , I THINK YOUR BLOG IS AMAZING. I REALY LIKE HOW YOU PUT THEM INTO PAREGRAPHS .I ALLSO REALY LIKE HOW YOU DID TITLES FOR ALL OF THEM. HOWEVER , YOU COULD ADD MORE PICTURES TO YOU BLOG. BYE
Hi Malak. Hi Retaj, nice blog but I disagree with your blog I think everyone should look the same on school days because when we go on trips we could get lost because we wont look the same.
Hi Malak! Hi Retaj!
I Really Enjoyed Reading Your Blog! It had some really good features but I think you could make it a bit more aesthetically pleasing as it doesn’t have many colours or pictures. You could also make the sentences in your blog a bit more interesting sentences. Furthermore, I totally agree with your blog! see you later!
Hi! I love the way your blog has been written. And I absolutely agree that children should wear comfy close to school. see you later aligater