Excellent ideas, Mais! You understand the key parts of the plot and captured the cruelty of Sally Bones very well. I can see that you’re working hard on spelling, punctuation and grammar which is good to see because sometimes working from home can feel a bit laid back.
The key corrections I would make here are the spelling of diary in “Dear Dairy” and rewriting the title with a possessive apostrophe to show that the diary belongs to SB.
“Sally Bones’ Diary” (This might sound like Sally Bones is diary)
NICE WORK MAIS
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